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Well hello there lublub. I'm a little late... as usual haha.

One thing I can go out and say right now is that this composition is purely beautiful. The transition between the beginning and the guitar is perfect in my opinion. This is exactly what I think when I hear heavy metal. I really like the drum beat, it really does bring out the most of the song. The part at around 2:23 is awesome! There is one part that I can't tell if I like it or not which is at 2:43 when the high chords of the guitar come in. It feels like some of the chords fit while others... maybe don't? I think you should leave that part in there though, I don't see any reason to take it out. That piano man... it fits the song perfect.

Truly was a great piece, don't know how this is below 4. Until next time, peace man

If you were ever to make an album, I think this song would have to be the album intro. I like how it's slow paced, giving it that enjoy the moment feeling. I'm with Kamunt when he says that the length of this song is perfect. Out of the whole song, the only thing that sticks out that I think can be improved is the end. For me at least, it feels like it ended a little abruptly, but maybe that's just me.

That's bad ass, now all it needs is some hardcore lyrics. When the second guitar came in, I had an eargasm, haha. The transitions are extremely strong in this, in other words, perfect. I love everything about this song and I can't wait to hear more from you man. Definitely a download for me. I've got to say, this is one of the best songs I have ever heard in the portal. Keep it coming man!

Dude, I love this stuff. its amazing quality. The only problem I have is it needs a better build up in the beginning. Is this just a preview of a full song? I would like to hear more, haha. Anyways, keep them coming.

Lublub194 responds:

Yeah, this is just a little preview, I suppose I could use a better build-up though...

Like I said below, I haven't composed anything in way too long, so it's a little rusty.

Thanks for your continued support man! I've always enjoyed it, and hope to for a long time! :D

ill be honest, I love the chord progression. I was surprised, it also loops pretty nicely. haha, with it being so short there really isn't anything else to say. The only reason I'm marking off a point is because it seems even for being so short there should be something more to it, maybe another instrument. Keep up the good work and were you planning on making this into a full song?

ganon95 responds:

like i said its meant for something bigger, there is some extra stuff that will be playing along side this to make it more "full"

HOLY SHIT, that intro was sick. The quality on this is over the top, fucking amazing. I can't contain my feelings for this song dude, a definite download for me. Keep them coming man.

5/5

Amazing intro, but I do have to agree with the reviewer below me. Awesome song, with the exception of the ending. What program, if I may ask, do you use? If it's FL Studio, I'd be completely blown away man, haha.

4.5/5
5/5

empire00 responds:

I use Abletone.

Loving this, and this isn't even my type of dubstep that I like. Awesome, although the transitions could be stronger. I like the breakdowns and the bass is pretty sweet. Keep it coming man, I enjoyed this.

4.5/5
4/5

It's alright, I would say it needs more, but with how short it is, it might just be fine. I do like the intro, it definitely gives the song character. I really wish you could extend this and actually make a song out of it. I am planning on making an intro for my Youtube videos, so if I do pick this song, I will give you credit and also let you know.

4.5/5
4/5

WarfareDubstep responds:

Ya man you're right :P It's just the break in to the song I'm making. I keep procrastinating on the issue of progressing my sound through knoledge, I have to start watching tutorials lol. I'm going to get better, I swear!

Feel free to use this and please do let me know! :)

I'm loving it man, there are only a few flaws that I can pick out. First, the transitions are a little weak, try to show that the melody is changing before you change it. Second, the song could use some compression. Other than those two, I cannot pick out anything else. Nice job man, and I love the drum kits that were used. Keep up the good work

4/5
4/5

KuroTheFox responds:

Thanks :D!

For over a decade, music has been my passion. I've been on Newgrounds since I was 5. That's nearly 20 years! I'll always remember this place as where it all began.

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