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That intro! I like it!!! haha, love how the kick fades in and out. I really like the first synth how that also fades down to a lower pitch. I have to say, it seemed like the time between introducing new elements seemed a little bit too long, perhaps its just me. That would have to be my only problem with the song. Everything else is perfect man! Great tune!

MarshmallowGherkin responds:

Yes, I admit, I often end up making portions of my songs go on for longer than they aught to. It's a problem I have ;P
(Fun fact: I make a ton of drone music and always feel like I'm switching things up too fast in those songs)

Hehe, but thanks for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

May I please ask WTF THIS IS!? hahahahhaa, all seriousness set aside, I cant help but actually enjoy this. Something about the gibberish she speaks and the ambience that comes in near the end, it just really hits me and I like it, hahaha. I think the fact of how fucked up this is, i might have to take off a single star, hahahhahaha.

C-G-B responds:

Thank you, this is the future of art.

ohhhhh dammmmnnnnn! love that intro man! LOVE LOVE LOVE the leads picked for this!!! awesome song that is definitely being added to my favorites. This type of work is hard to come by on Newgrounds. Consider it an honor that I am doing that, hahahha. Anyways, getting back to the review, perhaps finish this the way you want to and then make a re-release that has an awesome drum beat on it too. Feels like its missing a drum beat, but hey, I like it! awesome work man!!!

Cebster responds:

I am honored! ;)

I'd like to begin by saying the intro was pretty damn good and that I like the bass! Loved the beat and the snare you used. Like the guy below me, I also like the part at 0:58. Not much else to say for such a short song.

Wilhiemthe2nd responds:

I like the snare too, I think i use it again with Reverb next time, and try to recreate Dream Theater's Snare in their Images and Words Ablum. XD

Thank you very much, looking back on this, I think i will have the chords the organ plays go on for 4 more measures, that should improve on that awesome moment.

Thank you very much!~

WOW! That guitar man, loved it! Did you keep the beat and all the same or did you switch it up from the original? I love how you changed up the notes of the main melody for the guitar, awesome work man! Much appreciation! Keep up the great work!

HenryX responds:

thanks! :D

i'm so glad with your comment and i'm very happy if you enjoyed the "funky" rythm (believe me, it's not easy), and yeah, al beats are like the original (i dont remember if i boosted a little the first part).

please visit my profile for more songs :)

Very relaxing! I dont normally like Indy music, but I will make an exception for this song, haha. Definitely love the beat of the drums and the chords played by the guitar, very entrancing! Great job, amazing demo.

Cruzaflo responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I decided to use some basic jazz chords in a non-jazz style.

Loved the intro! The vocals in the beginning was amazing! That chorus is so addicting! Love the lyrics and they go straight to the heart! If this is the demo, I cannot wait for the finished product!!! Be sure to message me when you release it, ok? hahaha. Anyways, for being a demo, the length was great! btw, what is Seurat?

alcatraz5 responds:

George Seurat, Painted With Dots! It was an old pneumonic device we learned in school about a painter named George Seurat, who only painted compositions dot by dot until they were finished. Thanks for the review. :)

Dont necessarily like the beginning but hey, its not too bad. I like the beat but what I like the most is the instruments! Definitely beautiful! I have one thing to complain about, and thats the quality. When you export a song in FL, make sure you have the highest bitrate/dithering possible. it will take awhile longer to export but the quality is worth it. Not sure if you knew this already but I thought if you didnt it would be a great tip. All in all, the length of the song was perfect and the overall atmosphere of the song was great! Awesome song!

foreveryoung30912 responds:

Thanx for the tip, but it's telling me that I cannot open mp3 encoding stream

Double You-Tea-Eff means "W-T-F", hahaha. anyways, awesome song! brings back memories of my childhood playing this game. I really have to play it again! Love your set of instruments. some would complain that it sounds too much like the original, but I like the fact that it does. again, great job!

stunkel responds:

Thanks! Glad you liked it! I actually made this for someones animation so I didn't want to break too far from it. Thanks for the review though!

Head banging greatness. That's all I have to say. Not really. I loved the high pitched guitars, it mixed well with the effect of the song. I could really listen to your music if you added lyrics to all of them. So, why don't you?

Lublub194 responds:

I want to add lyrics to my next album, but I'm having writers block. besides I don't really have a singing voice. At least I don't feel as I do, anyways, someday when I do put lyrics on a song, I'll let you know.

For over a decade, music has been my passion. I've been on Newgrounds since I was 5. That's nearly 20 years! I'll always remember this place as where it all began.

Clay Schubert @carl565

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